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How You Move Me

Carmellita
2 min readJan 4, 2024

A poem and essay inspired by You.

“Move Me” created by Carmellita in Playground AI and Enhanced in Canva Pro

In enchanting prose,
your words dance before my eyes.

No structured cadence or rhymed scheme,
just the raw, untamed flow of expression.

Each sentence is a step, a subtle movement,
leading me through the landscapes of your thoughts.

No need for rhyme or rhythmic constraints,
freedom reigns in my imagination of your imagination.

I am carried by the current of your narrative,
swept away in the ebb and flow of your words.

You move like an unchoreographed ballet revealing
your truth, your passion, your story.

Phrases pirouette, and paragraphs twirl
metaphors waltz and similes sway.

No need for a scripted encore,
the climax unfolds in every whispered phrase.

And as the final punctuation descends,
a curtain of understanding gently falls.

Yet, continues to resonate within my soul —
oh, how you move me.

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Carmellita
Carmellita

Written by Carmellita

Writer, Poet, Storyteller, & Scholar. BA in Speech Communication. Joyful Creator. Blogger with an old-school flavor. A former ghostwriter who came back to life.

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