Carmellita
May 21, 2024

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Very evocative, Misbah. This poem is a breathtaking exploration of intimacy and connection. The imagery of 'fingers blurring' and 'souls melding' creates a sense of two beings dissolving into one. The lines about pain, pleasure, and peace speaks volumes.

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Carmellita
Carmellita

Written by Carmellita

Writer, Poet, Storyteller, & Scholar. BA in Speech Communication. Joyful Creator. Blogger with an old-school flavor. A former ghostwriter who came back to life.

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